One Dead, One Injured In RCAF Snowbirds Crash (Updated, Corrected) - AVweb

Impending engine failure, then pitched up to gain altitude and go around? Guess we’ll find out. The pilot must have landed on a bed to survive that. Beyond that, a 10 year old could write a clearer article than this professional reporter. Honestly, I don’t know why degrees are required for journalism. In describing the sequence of events, the author suddenly digresses into the maintenance people that generally accompany the Snowbirds. Also, the author makes it sound like the pilot hit the house and destroyed it. Please proof read the structure of your thoughts and sentences. Or hire me.